yodd's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the Boy... "Jade"]

Quite interesting...

>>>GOOD<<<
The animation was somewhat simplistic, with the movieclips and everything, but even with its simplicity it was good to watch, I see you used filters... but at the same time you used them only a bit, and in a very appropriate manor.
-The Drawings were nice, I liked how everything was shaded and the colors you blended together. I would just like to mention how the color schemes fit the story. You made the colors dark, just like it should be.
-I am assuming you are trying to make the flash scary/serious, and you did that, the movements were believeable for the situations.

<<<BAD>>>
-Eh, I thought the narative voice could have been a bit clearer, but nothing really.
-Short, I bet many people have told you this, so I won't touch more on it.

<><>OVERALL<><>
Really smooth animation, great color and wonderfully compiled, it was a joy to see. It was a serious flash with great quality, which is what we need more of here. If you keep this up your animation will improve, your drawing, and your flash in gerneral. I can't wait to see more from you.

-yodd

[Black&White fbf collab 3]

Vast improvement

>>>GOOD<<<
-This was a swell collab, it had no real bad parts, and it consisted of soooooooo many good ones.
-Ronald ravens part was... Well, it was so fucking great
-The music was good. The last one had bloodhound gang and another band, though they were good songs, they didn't fit with FBF. So this collab had way better music.
-All the buttons in the main menu worked, there was no over-lapping either in the music (COUGH, FISHook).
-Good FBF, I know it is a FBF collab, but many FBF collabs have mediocre fbf, this one perfected those 3 letters. :D
I suck at fbf, so I respect it >_>

<<<BAD>>>
ummmm, can't think of anything to put here. kdsjfhkaudhfk jjk lzxhjc hzlxc

<><>OVERALL<><>
Great collab
9.5/10
5/5

mr-womble responds:

thanks yodd :D...the scores gone up alot scince i last took a look so im thanking you for someof that :D

im glad some people really appreciate good quality animation with no point wat so ever :D

[Rhyming Words]

Nice one, woman

For a Tranny such as yourself making flash can be quite a hassle, but it was all good.

Funny song
good graphics
random

And sesame street, mm mm bacon.

woman.

Lord-Sonx responds:

tranny :O?

[Nineteen Hippos]

Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday, der bluehippo. Hope you had a most joyous exciting one at that!

As for the flash, it was pretty good. Graphics, theme, music.

It was all there.

Happy birthday and goodnight!

[Box Head ep.1]

MAAAAAAAN!

That was totally swell, let me get on it!

>>>The Good<<<
Hmm, everything! The graphics were good, it ran extremely smooth, made me laugh out loud (mostly the part where the rock missed and he stomped on it).

The use of colors was extremely, extremely good! Good shading, good drawings...

Incredible.

<<<BAD>>>
Not much, a storyline would help, and greater length would be cool ;)

<><>OVERALL<><>
A great flash work, and I strongly reccomend you make a tutorial on some of these effects (like the splash). You didn't use tweens for the movieclips (good for you) You did not use lazy animation, it shows you worked hard and it sure paid off.

So, dont get lazy with the animation, make a tutorial (kidding) and keep on doing what you are doing.

I can't wait for next weeks!

JimmyDot responds:

Thanks for the review, i like when people actually take the time.

[I dream of Moons]

mmhhmm

--INTRO--
Alright, this is your first ever submission, so in first submissions I put in more things that need to be improved on, for the record. Anyway, to the review!

>>>THE GOOD<<<
-Much of the art was splendid, well drawn and had a good use of colors. Looking at your car (as an example) you have good shades on it, and good uses of alpha, really good job, executed really well.

-cute: It was cute, your clock is a cooler looking one XD
-funny: many funny moments, the "thats enough of this" and the smashing of the car are prime examples of fairly good humor
-clock move: <3 clocks
<<<Needs improvement>>>
Once again, these are not raging on first film, but siad to help
-movement: some of the movement was sloppy, SBC jumping up and down, you need more of a better bound. For an example, when he touches the ground in his jump, make him spread a bit, for added character.
Wheels on car, would have been a nice added movement, also in the blast off when rocket was aiming off.
-speakonia: Althoug speakonia has same voices, you should adjust the speed, tone etc. depending on the mood. When SBC hurt your clocks feelings, a more whiney voice would have been a good touch.

<><>OVERALL<><>
Good movie, especially for a first, hope to see more from you, and the clock crew in gereral XD

<3

[A Kingly Melody]

ODD MATE

What a weird cartoon, random, funny and music I could fucking recognize... most people for pointless flashes use shitty music their 17 year old brother performed in the basement with a rock band who thinks they are good, but really sound like an 8 year old shooting their toes off.

The animation was smooth, however it needed some work. The flames looked like they were having a seizure, and when sbc walked from front view it looked un-natural, once SBC lands, he should shrink a bit and widen, and as hes going back up, get taller and skinier. Aside from this flash, I hate you because your a 14 year old and you can't be cool, sorry.

<3

MetalDart responds:

Thanks man, I knew some parts looked faulty, but I was too lazy to fix it.

Also, hows does it feel knowing a 14 year old is better than you at Flash? :P

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